Group Paragraphs

Today we had to finish up our group paragraphs and peer edit each other’s. My entire group left so it was just me revising the paragraph. I rewrote the entire paragraph on my own and as a result my group placed 2nd for the best written paragraph. Honestly it was exciting seeing how I placed higher by myself then with the majority of the class who was in groups.  It made me realize that I don’t really have writers block but I can focus better when I don’t over think a topic. I also realized that I need to expand my vocabulary and proofread my writings because what I think is correct is not what other see as correct. Overall I enjoyed class today because it wasn’t so hectic.